Part Eleven Edit, Plus General Update · 5:11pm Nov 3rd, 2020
Salvete,
It's been a while since my last post, from April to now. I have a few things to update everyone on.
First, I was rereading Part Eleven to refresh myself for finishing Part Twelve. I noticed a rather substantial error in the part where Luna teaches Neil to control his dream: when she showed him the apple he gave her during their first meeting?